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NOTES & REMINDERS:
past tense ~ past tense ~ past tense ~ past tense... ; )
Rewrite with names and characters AS IS, but with the intention of changing all character names we do not own and possibly changing the name of Camelot to something else.
Limited number of main characters
Location of W&W World: Whole new world, currently with many parallels to our own real one
Use a pen name for the author? Maybe a conglomeration of our 4 names? for shared credit - E. J. Daniels
YoH must be cut significantly to weed out impertinence
Story Outline Notes:
Xirt's Orb Quest is out - need to write another reason for Wolf to give Wenn the pendant, possibly her new post at the Ministry of Affairs and some threat/danger due to the MoA's spy stuff?
Simon & the Moat is in but needs major overhaul from massive logs
Elspeth & Livinghawk stuff is out
Wenn's Rannis confession to Wolf is out
Simon's Trial is not precisely a trial but most scenes will remain, circumstances are roughly... Council decides Simon will be sent to live with Wolf but the masses form a lynch mob and Simon intends to run away but maybe gets caught so we can use most of the chaos that has already been written? (Have I got that right?)
LordS is out for now but waiting in the wings if we need him
Tower and Fountain scenes - how explicit do we dare get (would really hate cliche "fade to black" )
Twins - possible evil sibling for Elandra who was secreted away by Q? No mechanics for this yet, caution advised
Morninglord is out. There will likely be some other Child(ren) of the Mother to fill in these spare plot points?
Possible comic relief cat mage (ala Rannis) if needed
Must have a char in Mage Consult seat on the Council before Ellinstar then do away with him, so far all we got is "stuffy"
Need chars for unfilled Council slots
Need to replace AC with another, details as yet undetermined other than likely on the Council and serves as Wenn's guardian and Simon's adoptive father until Wolf nabs him ;) - Hey! Maybe it's the Council member who gets knocked off before Ellinstar comes into the picture AND wouldn't this make it ok for Poet to return with the gauntlet, if the dude is dead? Free's Simon and Wenn and Poet too?
Knight's Oath - need one, incl loophole for variable faith
Minister of Affairs also runs the spy network ; )
Items still in discussion:
Dragons - yes or no? What would our dragons be like?
Name for the Isle - Founding? "foundation" in Welsh, ie, Grendwal... something. Still Isle of Hope for now.
Other:
FIND - Wolf gave Simon the wolf ring in Camelot
FIND - Wolf took the ring (8/1?)
CHANGE - Simon's "trial" to an "inquiry" consistently
DECIDE: Q as Rosie? If so, use name Rosie or maybe Natalie? aka Natty?
DECIDE: great hall or greathall
DECIDE: Ellinstar or Ellin Star or EllinStar
DECIDE: spelling of Brigid and make it consistent throughout
FIX: Simon would not mistake Q for Wolf unless we change him -from- white to black later
IDEA: Mystical Twelve... gemstones?
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